Hi im Brandnew to this hole yu-gi-oh card game & my friend gave me 200 cards to build a deck so i didi he said i had to make a good one cuzz he wanted to take me to state champions or something like that would u take a look And tell me what you think

Monsters 27
sacred Phenix of Nephthys
2x Armed Dragon LV5
2x Zaorg the thunder monarch
Mobius the frost monarch
2x Cybernetic Magician
armed Dragon lv7
silent swordsman lv7
2x Silent swordsman lv5
Jinzo
armed Dragon LV3
silent swordsman LV3
2x injection fairy lily
spirit reaper
night assailant
D.D. assailant
2x exiled force
sangan
treeborn Frog
D.D. warrior lady
pitch black warwolf
Mystic swordsman lv2

Spells 14
heavy storm
giant trunade
brain control
mystical space typhoon
2x enemy controller
lightning vortex
swords of revealing light
reinforcement of the army
pot of avarice
metamorphosis
nobleman of crossout
snatch steal
cost down

traps 5
ring of destruction
torrential tribute
barrel behind the door
sakuretsu armor
ultimate offering

all = 46

fusions 1
Elemental hero flame wingman


Tell me how i can make this better it has 46 cards together And i don't know what to do so i need as much help as i can get if i can make a good deck my friend will let me keep it & also will give me his old ds lite I REALLY WANT THAT DAMN DS LITE PLZ HALP ME!!!!!!!!!!! thank you `teddy`

Monsters 25
sacred Phenix of Nephthys
2x Armed Dragon LV5
2x Zaorg the thunder monarch
Mobius the frost monarch
2x Cybernetic Magician
2x Silent swordsman lv5
Jinzo
armed Dragon LV3
silent swordsman LV3
2x injection fairy lily
spirit reaper
night assailant
D.D. assailant
2x exiled force
sangan
treeborn Frog
D.D. warrior lady
pitch black warwolf
Mystic swordsman lv2

Spells 14
heavy storm
giant trunade
brain control
mystical space typhoon
2x enemy controller
lightning vortex
swords of revealing light
reinforcement of the army
pot of avarice
metamorphosis
nobleman of crossout
cost down

traps 5
ring of destruction
torrential tribute
barrel behind the door
sakuretsu armor
ultimate offering

all = 43
And what format is this deck?
*WTF*

Err this is suppose to be traditional or advance cause this is a bad traditional deck.

Post it in traditional and I will help out.